In his compendium “Lend Me Yours Ears: Great Speeches in History,” the late speechwriter, columnist, and language maven William Safire defined the three elements that make a memorable address: the magnitude of the occasion, the forum in which the speech is delivered, and, naturally, the “content and phrasing” of the speech itself.
Daniel Lurie earned high marks Wednesday for two qualities largely outside of his control. He became San Francisco’s 46th mayor in what is undeniably a moment of enormous magnitude in the city’s history. And the setting was San Francisco at its glorious best, a resplendent winter morning on Civic Center Plaza, the golden dome of City Hall behind him and cloudless blue skies above.
“It feels like a RESET,” a city official texted me as Lurie was beginning to speak.
As for the content and phrasing, Lurie’s performance was more middling. It was a solid if not soaring speech, drafted by his longtime speechwriter, Jennifer Pitts, alongside campaign consultant Tyler Law and spokesman Maxwell Szabo. At 19 minutes, it was half what Safire, in 2004, deemed the minimum length of a “major address.” Lurie was a bit rushed at points in his delivery, and he ended not with the crescendo of a rousing call to action but rather with a bit of a pedestrian letdown: “It’s time to roll up our sleeves and get to work, San Francisco,” he said.